Friday, January 4, 2019

My Fantastic beast

Ki Ora bloggers 




Today Im going to make my own fantastic beast like J.K Rowling did in the Harry Potter Books and movies.  My monster would have phoenix wing and a dragon head. It will also have the body of a phoenix and a dementor combined,  the demtors from the Harry Potter books/movies. It will have a voice of a phoenix it will be able to talk. When you feel it it will feel like a bird and it will look like it is hovering but it has feather,and a body. The gender of this species of beasts will all be male. 

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  1. CiaJanuary 7, 2019 at 4:06 PM

    Aloha Miraj,

    Half Dementor..Is your beast from the dark side? Did it inherit a Dementor's power? I picture a creature mashup of the Dementors and Fawkes the Phoenix (from Harry Potter). What colour is your beast?

    Perhaps next time you could use more adjectives to really paint a picture of your beast. Maybe even create a rough sketch that could help your readers see your vision better.

    I love the movie Fantastic Beasts, have you seen it? One of my favourite creatures from the film was Newt's Bowtruckle, I just thought its tiny green twig like body, leafy head and little brown eyes were really cute! One creature I wouldn't want to come across would be a Mandrake, their screeching is so ear piercing..

    Keep working hard Miraj, I look forward to reading more from you over the summer.

    Toe feiloa'i fo'i,

    Cia.

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