Max in candy land

Max the sailor was sailing though the rough seas and he was sailing to Candy land. Once he got there he found a giant castle and he climbed to the throne room at the top. He would climb down to get his food every day. After a few days he had no food left. Then he realized that he could eat a little bit of the castle. The right after that he got cavity. Max's cavity was hurting so much that Max touched it and the it fell out. It was bleeding then he left Candy land and put his head in the water. Then he left and said goodbye.